Sharing Our Summarising by Story Tree House

This week Story Tree House has been learning how to summarise different parts of non fiction texts. Can you identify some feedback and feedforward for us based on the success criteria for summarising?

Letters to Mrs and Mr Twit by George and Tanuki

Dear Mr and Mrs Twit

Mr and Mrs Twit stop being so mean to each other all it does is make a huge problem.  It will end up in a disaster. everyone has feelings it feels better if you help each other instead of making mean plans to prank EACH OTHER! if you help each other you can accomplish lots of things.

From George

Dear George 

Mr Twit always makes plans and does tricks all the time and that's why I do tricks on him. I have always wondered why he is so horrible. He always does tricks on me and its very annoying. I wish that he didn't live here. I wish he lives in Antarctica so that I live alone and don't get annoyed. I have always wished that he didn't cause a big problem. I will only feel better if Mr Twit goes away. I play tricks on Mr Twit to tell him to stop playing tricks on me and so he stops being horrible.

From Mrs Twit 

By Tanuki 

The Big Battle of Victory - By George

The Big Battle of Victory.

Introduction:

6000 years ago there was a soldier he was called Sir George

Sir George was braver than 1000 men. He was tufe he was ferlis and he was not on his own. He had an army and they were stuck in middle of the ocean searching for land.

Chapter 1 - The Problem:

17 days later they found land they hunted for food, made shelters and beds until sir George decided to explore the other side of the island so they did. While the soldiers searched they found a legendary army they were novice and scared they had no choice but to protect their master some they engaged the enemy but they were caught.

Chapter 2 - The Surrender:

Only one escaped and he promised Sir Cheater Charles that he would bring Sir George to Sir Cheater Charles so he did do what Sir Cheater Charles said. 2 days later he went back to Sir Cheater Charles hut with Sir George. He had no choice but to surrender so he did. Sir George said (I can be first in command and you can roar to your army and I can talk to my army)

Chapter 3 - The Crab Army:

As soon as the conversation was over they made brigis to other islands suddenly an army crabs came out of nowhere but it not at all tufe so they crushed the crabs SMASH BOOM BAM ZAP BOOM BAM SMASH ZAP and the crabs were all dead so they carried on making bridges to other islands

Chapter 4 - Game Over:

8 years later they were in peace and they head no more things to do so they played and played and played and played as years soldier by soldier died only Sir George and Sir Cheater Charles were alive.

The End

I hope you engod it

How to make a Enderman Statue By George

The aim of this challenge is to make a sculpture in 25 minutes

You will need:

• 20 pisis of spaghetti(not cooked)
• 3 marshmallows 2 white and 1 pink
• 2m of tape
• sisas
• a roola
• a pen

Procedure

First make a rectangle shape for the body.

Then cut one side of a white marshmallow. the small pies is the hat and the big pies is the head.

Next make the legs. the legs are 38cm long. use the rola to measure the spaghetti. use the pen to mark where to cut the spaghetti.

After that make the arms. the arms are 38cm long. use the rola to measure the spaghetti. use the pen to mark where to cut the spaghetti.

Then make the spear the handle is a hole spaghetti stick the sharp tip of it is 20cm long you need two 20cm long pieces of spaghetti. 

Next get the pink marshmallow and cut two small pieces of pink marshmallow and stick it to the head for the eyes. 

Finlay use the last marshmallow for the throne.  

It should look a bit like this:

By George

the steep hill George S

This week WALHT use our email to share our writing on the blog.

When will I get to the top of this steep hill? I hate going up steep hills it always hurts my legs so badly.  I kept slipping behind. I wanted Dad to wait for me. I asked  Dad can I hold your hand so I don't fall behind. We got to the look out but there was still a bit to go.  I said Oscar isn't this steep we will not catch up to Addison for a while.  when I looked around I saw silver ferns and trees my dad said if it is a silver fern it will have silva on the bottom.  when I looked down I saw heaps of leaves then I noticed it was a bit slippery and bumpy to walk on.  after a while I started to feel tired and slow down the more I walked.  then it started to get colder and colder because the trees were blocking the sun out.