Friday, 20 June 2014

The Strom

Last night I heard a crash of trees. I was scared so I went into my parents room. I was terrified. I woke up because I was scared. I woke up at 4 o'clock in the morning. My cat was scared and frightened too. It looked like my cat was going to crazy. It was scary. It was creepy and terrifying.

By Kodi


  1. I loved the start it wowed me

  2. Well done Kodi. It was pretty well ordered. I would like to know more detail about how your cat was being crazy. From Miss Winder's blog workshop group.

  3. Excellent story Kodi. It really sounds like a scary stormy night for you and your cat. Your story is very well written and structured. Well done and keep up the good work.
    From Cindy, Telecom


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