Sharing Our Summarising by Story Tree House

This week Story Tree House has been learning how to summarise different parts of non fiction texts. Can you identify some feedback and feedforward for us based on the success criteria for summarising?

Violet days by Tanuki

                                                            On violet days

                                                             I feel excited 

                                                   Like beautiful purple flowers 

                                                                Blooming

                                                            In the moonlight 

The Scary Hurricane By Mikayla T and Tanuki K

The Scary Hurricane

By Mikayla and  Tanuki

disgusting water

flooded home

ginormous waves

trees going side to side

trees almost coming off the ground

high waves

dancing trees

people taking photos

breaking homes

water coming on bridge  

dark hurricane

lights on

raining

broken homes

trees smashed

damage

leaves off  trees

water on rocks

water up stairs

Letters to Mrs and Mr Twit by George and Tanuki

Dear Mr and Mrs Twit

Mr and Mrs Twit stop being so mean to each other all it does is make a huge problem.  It will end up in a disaster. everyone has feelings it feels better if you help each other instead of making mean plans to prank EACH OTHER! if you help each other you can accomplish lots of things.

From George

Dear George 

Mr Twit always makes plans and does tricks all the time and that's why I do tricks on him. I have always wondered why he is so horrible. He always does tricks on me and its very annoying. I wish that he didn't live here. I wish he lives in Antarctica so that I live alone and don't get annoyed. I have always wished that he didn't cause a big problem. I will only feel better if Mr Twit goes away. I play tricks on Mr Twit to tell him to stop playing tricks on me and so he stops being horrible.

From Mrs Twit 

By Tanuki