Hub 1 and 2 went to the Okahu Bay beach and we went on a school bus.
I needed to bring sun block, raincoat, some spare clothes and a hat.
We went there because it was summer and I went on the flying fox.
It went fast and fast because the wind made the flying fox go quick.
It was fun. We played fun games on the grass at Okahu Bay. I went in this twirly thing and it was fun. We had morning tea and lunch at the park.
l went to see the beach and l saw rocks.
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