Monday, 24 November 2014

Firework, by Nathan

I'm at the shop. I'm a firework. iIm at a house now.  Now i'm in the garden. Now i'm zooming up in the sky weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I'm as gold as treasure and as blue as the sky and as colourful as a rainbow and as colorful as a rainbow lollipop. Now i'm at the sun. Now i'm turning around. Now I'm back in the shop so someone will buy me next year.

1 comment:

  1. As I read your piece of writing I felt just like a firework! Great use of similie!


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