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Hi Hailey, I really like how you used your adjective word scattered that makes a picture in my mind of wood scattered around on the ground. I would feel real sad if it was something really important like our nature. I see that you have been connecting to what you know about nature and what you think will happen if it happened for real.
Good morning Hailey,
ReplyDeleteYour poem reminded me of how I would feel if I saw Tane Mahuta, the giant kauri tree, chopped down. I would definitely feel blue.
Hi Hailey,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used your adjective word scattered that makes a picture in my mind of wood scattered around on the ground. I would feel real sad if it was something really important like our nature. I see that you have been connecting to what you know about nature and what you think will happen if it happened for real.
Kind regards, Mina
Hi Hailey,
ReplyDeleteI like your piece of writing because you used lots of descriptive words,
I don’t like it when people chop down trees in the wood’s either.
hI hailey, your poem connects well with your picture. I love it!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Hailey. Your poem is really cool! My poem is about red and a fire breathing dragon! Is your the setting near the beach?
ReplyDeleteHi Hailey,I would feel sad if I saw a tree scattering in the woods. Maybe you should add more detail?
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