Thursday, 5 November 2015

Yellow by Emily S

On  yellow days.
I feel happy
Like the sun
shining brightly in the morning
through my bedroom window.


  1. I love how you have created your own drawing to go with your poem Emily. It looks really cool. What tool did you use?

  2. Hallå Emily,
    On yellow days I feel happy too, especially if it is the weekend and I have some outdoor activities planned.

  3. Hailey treadgold9 November 2015 at 18:43

    Hi Emily I like your witing of yollow. I can imagine the sun shining though my window from your story.

  4. Hallå Emily
    I like your drawing and on sunny days i feel happy to and i like your picture i can see how beautiful it is and detailed

  5. I like your poem Emily. In the morning the sun shines through my window too.
    Do you like the sun shining through your window too?

  6. Hi Emily,
    I really like the picture that you did on Google draw. It gives me a picture in my mind about it for real life. There are descriptive words that seek out the main information about what you wanted your poem to look like. It looks great, keep it up!

  7. I like your poem Emily. On yellow days I feel happy too. I like your picture. What does the sun feel like to you Emily?

    1. Emily your sentences are great! I felt that yesterday about the sun shining. How did you feel in the morning?

  8. Emily I love your poem. You are really good at poems, and i’m pretty good myself. I am writing a poem in my writing. Maybe I can read your poem in the library. It is very good, I wish I could do such good poems. Where did you get all of your ideas for your poem?

  9. Hey Emily nice poem. This reminded me of when I had a cricket match and it was really sunny.


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