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hi Olivia I really like how you used amazing words in your poem like elegantly and satisfied and breeze.i also like how you used capital letters after the full stops. i think you have a great talent for writing poems.
Hi Olivia, I really liked the word satisfied that you used in your poem. I also feel satisfied on some days. I see you are getting the setting from what you know about nature because you are using grass and breeze in there which makes it feel like a lot of nature as the topic. Well done, Keep it up!
Hi Oliver I like your story of green and I like the dancing gras.
ReplyDeletehi Olivia
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used amazing words in your poem like elegantly and satisfied and breeze.i also like how you used capital letters after the full stops.
i think you have a great talent for writing poems.
hi Olivia I really like your post because it is calm and has lots of detail. and it is amazing where did you come up with it?
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the word satisfied that you used in your poem. I also feel satisfied on some days. I see you are getting the setting from what you know about nature because you are using grass and breeze in there which makes it feel like a lot of nature as the topic. Well done, Keep it up!