Wednesday, 4 November 2015

Green by Olivia R


  1. Hailey treadgold9 November 2015 at 17:54

    Hi Oliver I like your story of green and I like the dancing gras.

  2. hi Olivia
    I really like how you used amazing words in your poem like elegantly and satisfied and breeze.i also like how you used capital letters after the full stops.
    i think you have a great talent for writing poems.

  3. hi Olivia I really like your post because it is calm and has lots of detail. and it is amazing where did you come up with it?

  4. Hi Olivia,
    I really liked the word satisfied that you used in your poem. I also feel satisfied on some days. I see you are getting the setting from what you know about nature because you are using grass and breeze in there which makes it feel like a lot of nature as the topic. Well done, Keep it up!


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