Sunday, 15 November 2015

Fireworks Day by Max


  1. I loved reading your recount Max. You have sequenced your ideas clearly. I really like how you created your own drawing. I celebrated Guy Fawkes too. What did you have for dinner?

  2. Hi Max, wow that is some amazing writing because the writing has lots of adjectives. You must of had a good time. I got to do fireworks too. Did you have lots of fun?

  3. Hi Max That was a very good poem.That reaminded me of when I went to the beach and went surfing.Have you bean surfing before?


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