Sunday 15 November 2015

Fireworks Day by Max

3 comments:

  1. I loved reading your recount Max. You have sequenced your ideas clearly. I really like how you created your own drawing. I celebrated Guy Fawkes too. What did you have for dinner?

    ReplyDelete
  2. Hi Max, wow that is some amazing writing because the writing has lots of adjectives. You must of had a good time. I got to do fireworks too. Did you have lots of fun?

    ReplyDelete
  3. Hi Max That was a very good poem.That reaminded me of when I went to the beach and went surfing.Have you bean surfing before?

    ReplyDelete

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.