Monday 9 November 2015

Blue by Max F

4 comments:

  1. HallÄ Max

    On blue days i feel lonely to and i can really tell from the pitcher that you are lonely.

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  2. Hi Max I like your poem. I feel lonely too on blue days. Why do you feel lonely on blue days?

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  3. Hi Max I really like your poem and I like the colour orange. Do you like the colour orange?

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  4. Amazing writing Max. I like your sun and waves because the blue stands out and the sun looks hot.I have made a connection going to a rocky beach too.

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