Friday, 18 September 2015

The Horror House by Xzavier

Once there was a monster and a nogard and they were friends. One day Iceman and Fireman had a fight. The Fireman had the shutting gun and Iceman had a shutting gun too. One day there
was a horror house and iceman went in it. Boom! Crash! "What was that?" said Fireman
to himself. He went into the house. "Ahahahahah" yelled Iceman. When Fireman went into that room there was blood
everywhere."Hahahahahahahahah" laughed a monster. "What is that sound?" said Fireman. "It's a...a monster!" said Fireman and he ran and ran until the monster zoomed into the sky. The Fireman was happy. He lived happily ever after.

1 comment:

  1. I love how you used speech marks " ..." to show the talking, as it helped me to hear the characters' voices in my head.


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